hope you guys enjoy these tips and info about common app essay mistakes to avoid! since ive read and edited so many essays, i thought i would share the knowledge with you guys! see you guys soon :)

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1:24 meaningless metaphors
3:26 direct statements
4:26 lack of a catalyst
7:10 focusing on stuff that's not you
8:41 excessive use of adverbs and weird descriptions
10:09 too much repetition

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