So I've been doing this essay review since last year and many of you have gotten into the top unis (YAY!!). But these are some of the MOST COMMON mistakes I always comment on and give suggestions for people to improve upon.

I'm thinking of making this a series where I give more examples of how to convey your story better in your personal statement let me know if you guys want this! :)

If you're interested in the essay review service, my quote starts from £150. Drop me an email for more details

// resources
Watch this first, I explained in detail how to approach your personal statement and shared mine too:    • My Cambridge MPhil (Masters) Personal...  

For more things to avoid, check my Oxford PS (I didn't get into it and learned a lot from my own PS):    • My Oxford Personal Statement & Mistak...  

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// frequently asked questions
• Where are you from? I was born and raised in Indonesia I studied in the UK for five years and now working in Singapore
• Where did you study? My Bachelor's was at Coventry University and my Master's was at Cambridge!
• What did you study? Financial Economics for undergrad, then Development Studies for master
• What is it like to study Development? I ranted about it here    • ranting about my development studies ...  

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