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Intro: 0:00
Essay: 0:11
1st paragraph: 3:32
2nd paragraph: 4:16
3rd paragraph: 4:52
Comparing the 2nd & 3rd paragraphs: 5:28
4th paragraph: 5:51
Turning point: 6:17
Recap of the first half of the essay: 6:52
5th paragraph: 7:07
6th paragraph: 7:42
7th paragraph: 8:30
8th (& last) paragraph: 9:57
Tip 1: 11:44
Tip 2: 12:02
Tip 3: 12:26
Outro: 12:43